Antigone Cadmus

Greece

Minotaur

Bonjour, mon amie! (Mes amis would be many friends xD) Well, this is... short. :shock: Post more next time! There's hardly anything to critique, but I'll try... My name is ...

Thanks a ton Stell. xD Now, I know your grammar is better than mine, but "flame" sounds better to me here... >-< But there are lots of flameSSSS. :wink: You ...

Wouldn't carpet in a bathroom get soaked? Although I do like the Christmas Tree. :)

My advice is to check out the formatting of other books that switch viewpoints. What I've noticed is that they use chapter breaks. One chapter would be titled "Jenna", and ...

This thread is so empty! Please and thank you? :D --Antigone

>-< There's a problem with this. It's written fine, but I do see a ton of grammar issues. But besides that, you're going to have a big porble writing about ...

Ah let's see... ~ Vampires named "Vlad" or "Dracula" = no no. I hate when vampire writers name characters -- ugh! You aren't Bram Stoker, be original! xD ~ Anything ...

Jetpack -- Duuuude! I totally meant pursuing. *smacks self* Well, according to my spell check, perusing is a word, although I've never hear it used. ;) Thanks a lot! That ...

you an take a notebook anywhere! A plot bunny never escapes.

Why is this thread so empty? :o This will not do! Fantasy Fiction The product of a Word War, so look at for some crazy spelling. Once in a WW ...

My silly little word war pieces. Please and thank you?

It's meh. It reminds me of the scene in Monty Python and the Holy Grail with Tom the magician. xD 3/10

Yes we can. :) You're so pretty! 'Specially your hair. I envy everyone with straight hair. The picture of you on the window sill is very nice.